When we want to create an a story or we want to create a text, you have to put your ideas in order, and a great method for do that is create an a conceptual map as the following, for example:

After the creation of the map, and the organization of the ideas, we can begin with the story and we can write it.

ACROSS THE ROAD.-

Jane was a girl that has lived all her life on the countryside. She was 19 years old, but it didn't matter. The time didn't count in her world.

The thing is that she doesn't have family, and all the days she wakes up, drinks a cup of tea and goes out for a walk.

Sometimes she thinks if is normal the idea of haven't a friend or something like that.

She watches the trees and tries to count the leaves. The hour passes, and when the night becames, she comes back to her home.

In the days when is raining, she watches through the window and tries to understand why she is there. But the thing is that she doesn't know that is my humanity who is there. It doesn't matter. Someday i will see another person in front of my home and she or he will be the next person who will watch through the window.

Hello! Well, today i had to do a lot of exercises in this website:

http://www.rong-chang.com/easyread/emx/emx15601.htm



You can practice the organization of the words on a sentence.
Sometimes it's very difficult because we think that the sentences always begin with an auxiliar verb like: Do...? or with a WH....What?.....Where?..... / But in this exercises you have to begin sentences with "It's" or "And" for example.
It's a very useful website so..You can do it! Try it !

III.- Bedrooms 2nd part

Oh my god! I want this bedroom! Is very clean and has a lot of things but in order! The bed is very light-blue and the carpet is so cute! The colors of the walls are so beautiful. i love this colors! The only thing that i don't like of this place is the skate on the floor because i don't like it, but in generally I love it! :)

III.- Bedrooms

Ash!... This is an horrible place. An horrible bedroom! I think that this place is very stinky! I could not live in this place! with a lot of disorder and things not clean. I can see a lot of clothes on the floor. At the end of the room i see a TV. I think that this person doesn't clean his/her bedroom from a long time ago. But, this room have a lot of light.

II.- Santiago

This picture is very ugly. It's have a lot of smog and pollution. I think that this picture was taken in the winter or something like that. The air is very bad in this picture, but this situation is very normal in Santiago. We have a lot of cars and buses in this city, but after the rain we can see beautiful landscapes.

I think that this picture was taken after the rain! The sky is very clear. You can see the mountains far far away. You can see the buildings and a lot of trees.

Description.-

I.- Office

Well, this is a very ugly place. It has a lot of sheets of paper, a lot of disorder, garbage, folders! I can't see the blue carpet very well, and i only can see (in order) the monitor of the PC.

The room has a lot of light and it's very white.

I couldn't walk in there! It's a disaster.

It's a very pretty place, very beautiful and it's in order. Is cleaner that the picture that i described before. And it's an office too!

I can find a lot of sheets of paper but in order! You can see the PC too? I can! It's very beautiful.

Something about the marriage...

In our group we talked about the marriage and about the divorce. We thought that in the world now is less common think that the marriage is an option when you want to live with someone and have a family. 

Now is more common that the lovers and the couples live together in a place, and they have children out of the marriage.

In my case I wish to marry with someone, but I think that this isn't essencial for the life. I can live with someone in a place and have a family too.